tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3388578325782539013.post4220975986870317535..comments2024-03-26T17:32:38.865-04:00Comments on YA Outside the Lines: Weaving IndependenceBrian Katcherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15159532800819759917noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3388578325782539013.post-55111524076598156112012-07-11T17:49:53.479-04:002012-07-11T17:49:53.479-04:00Great analogy! Love this post.Great analogy! Love this post.Jan Blazaninhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01085118289400659555noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3388578325782539013.post-88020778627982971482012-07-10T22:14:31.322-04:002012-07-10T22:14:31.322-04:00I love that you admit your early drafts feel like ...I love that you admit your early drafts feel like a mess--so do mine!Holly Schindlerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16742207239654178917noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3388578325782539013.post-18497450467033031672012-07-09T07:35:44.352-04:002012-07-09T07:35:44.352-04:00Yes!!! It's soooo true. I've had to do tha...Yes!!! It's soooo true. I've had to do that too. :o)Kimberly Sabatinihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18143516055206233316noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3388578325782539013.post-34869579421533158182012-07-08T15:28:02.126-04:002012-07-08T15:28:02.126-04:00This reminds me of a scene in a work in progress. ...This reminds me of a scene in a work in progress. It was based on a true event, and I wrote it very much like the way it happened. My editors said it lacked tension. When I reminded myself that it's fiction, it can happen differently from the way it really happened, then I was able to write a more tension-filled and interesting scene.Jennifer R. Hubbardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03408588432492354248noreply@blogger.com