My Magi--by Ellen Jensen Abbott
My
post this month falls just about half way between Christmas and Epiphany, the
day the Christian calendar celebrates the visit of the Magi, or the three
kings, to the baby Jesus. So today I want to celebrate my magi—the three women
who bring gifts to my writing life.
My
first magi is my editor, Robin. When Robin reads my drafts, she sees what the
draft can become and gives spot-on advice to help me realize my vision. She
always reminds me that this is my book
and gives me last say in any changes she suggests. She is sparing with her
praise so when she says something is “good” I really believe her. She put up
with my extremely long draft for The
Centaur’s Daughter and helped me cut 100 pages by cutting words and
phrases—not one whole page was cut!
(It was just a tad over written….) She feels almost the same level of
vulnerability as I do when one of our books goes out into the world, which
makes me feel just a little less vulnerable.
My
second magi is my agent, Ginger. Of course Ginger does all the things a good
agent does: she translates the legalese of contracts and answers my never
ending questions about secondary rights, how “export” differs from “foreign
rights,” and the difference between unbound sheets, galleys, and ARCs. She
stands up for rights I don’t even know I have. She always offers to tell my publisher
the things I don’t have the guts to tell her myself, and then she proofreads
the e-mail I draft when I know it really should be me who speaks up, guts or no
guts. When I wrote to her angsty over the current state of a book synopsis, she
began her response to me as follows: “My dearest Ellen, If you were in the room
with me, I would speak softly and guide you gently down from the wall--or ceiling, as the case may be.” When a former-mentor read my
manuscript and decided not to blurb it, Ginger interrupted taking her daughter
to camp so she could commiserate with me.
My
third magi is my beta reader, Margaret. Margaret has a PhD in history,
specializing in Quaker Women, but she also loves fantasy and scifi. There is no
better person than a historian to help a fantasy writer figure out issues of
world building. She reads my novels and thinks about economy, demographics, social
structure, and sustainability of lifestyle as well as characterization and plot
development. When I was concerned that my community of Watersmeet in my first
book Watersmeet was too city-like to
continue as a hunter-gatherer society, she told me about a Turkish
archeological site where a city was indeed supported by hunting and gathering. She
is creeped out in the right places and roots for the right characters, while
also saying, “Yeah, that part didn’t really work for me.” When I’ve been faced
with a deadline, she’s read drafts double time and then Fedexed them to me.
Ginger
(see Magi #2) pointed out to me once that success in this business is not just
in Amazon rank or starred reviews. For most writers, success has to be found in
other measures as well. One aspect of success is a happy, nurturing
relationship with your editor, your agent, your readers. That’s what I have
with Robin, Ginger, and Margaret. In this month of celebration, I want to
celebrate my writing Magi.
(an image of gold, frankincense and myrrh)
(an image of gold, frankincense and myrrh)
LOVE these magi!
ReplyDeleteWe can't do this alone, can we? :-)
ReplyDeletethank you. this post is a gift too.
ReplyDeleteWhat a sweet and thoughtful post. I loved learning more about your magi, Ellen. And Happy New Year to you!
ReplyDeleteEllen, this is such a great post! It's wonderful that you have such women in your life who pull for your writing.
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